I need your help #LinkedIn#Ohana !!

I need your help #LinkedIn#Ohana !!

Kevin Jackson asked me to write out the Vision and Values of a #V2MOM for this project I was discussing with him, and it made me think.

I don’t have one for myself. 😐

I left the consulting world to start my training and coaching business in 2021, but though I knew what I wanted to do, I never really sat down to think about how to articulate my vision.

My goal is to help people be better at delivering Salesforce projects through being better humans, through my doodles, my writings and my video posts.

But how do I say that succinctly?

Here’s what I came up with:
𝗧𝗼 𝗰𝗼𝗮𝗰𝗵 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗶𝗻𝘀𝗽𝗶𝗿𝗲 𝗶𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗻𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻𝗮𝗹 𝗹𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗲𝗿𝘀𝗵𝗶𝗽 𝗶𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗦𝗮𝗹𝗲𝘀𝗳𝗼𝗿𝗰𝗲 𝗽𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗻𝗲𝗿 𝗲𝗰𝗼𝘀𝘆𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗺 𝘁𝗼 𝗯𝗿𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗳𝗼𝗿𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗱 𝗮 𝗻𝗲𝘄 𝗴𝗲𝗻𝗲𝗿𝗮𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗼𝗳 𝗹𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗲𝗿 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝘀𝘂𝗹𝘁𝗮𝗻𝘁𝘀, 𝘁𝗼 𝗰𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗱𝗲𝗲𝗽𝗹𝘆 𝗮𝗯𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗶𝗿 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗸 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝗲𝗼𝗽𝗹𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝘆 𝘀𝗲𝗿𝘃𝗲.

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It’s really really wordy and so very clumsy.
Very corporate-y and word salad-y.

I need a better one.

I don’t want ChatGPT to help me. 🙅🏻‍♀️

I want people who follow me, who feel that my writing resonates, to help me craft this.

I need the words, the language, and the verbiage to help crystalize my vision and mission so that I can do more of it, better.

Can you help?

By the way, while you are here, I’d love some feedback on how I’ve been doing so far – my posts, my videos, my doodles and my writing.
What’s resonated, what’s not.
What you’d like to see more of, and vice versa.

Give it to me. 🤜🏻
I’m big enough and I’m bad enough to take all kinds of feedback. 💪🏻
Even if they’re yucky! 😛

ps: I think ketchup could work on a savoury donut, though am not sure about tofu ones! 🍩😁

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